Tuesday, February 24, 2015
Poem
I am Tamim.
I wonder if I am what I think I am.
I hear fear.
I see you near.
I want to play.
I am nothing you say.
I pretend to do work.
I feel like i need a meal.
I touch nothing much.
I worry when my eye sight is blurry.
I cry when I say bye.
I understand good and bad.
I say I need a hand.
I dream about ice cream.
I try my best.
I hope I pass the test.
This is my poem. I wrote all this because I do this a lot.
Monday, February 23, 2015
Thursday, February 19, 2015
Wednesday, February 18, 2015
Onomatopeia
Zoom! Went the car past me at the race track. It was a super sunny Friday. “It felt like it was going at 100 kilometers per hour”.
Like a pack of wolves, 10 other cars raced past me. After the cars went as fast as light past me, I was cheering for the bright red car.
Thirty minutes later the race still didn’t finish. It felt like a year since I was there. It was lap forty nine and they were nearly finished. The bright red car came 2nd. Bang Boom! Went the fireworks. As they celebrated.
Labels:
Onomatopeia,
Writing
Friday, February 13, 2015
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